The reason I chose this story is because it is very descriptive and has a boat load of language features.
Underneath his black top hat lays a world of depression. His sharp crystal hair surrounds this world.He looks as dull as morning fog.His wrinkly frail skin contours his pursed lips.This man's pale droopy thin skin gives him a fragile and aged look.The earnings that hangs down gives him a feminine style. Keith s droopy eyes scream" I'm alone, depressed and I'm sad.
The black gloomy suit that sits upon Keths body has the expression of a biker gang. Leather jeans are as black as a black abyss suit his emotion.Due to his sad depressive look the background shades his slight bit of colour that isn't there any more he is a sad man.
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